Bonjour, Pouvez-vous me corriger ceci: On the one hand, I would like to talk about a short story called A lesson not learn which comes from True Tales of Americ
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Bonjour,
Pouvez-vous me corriger ceci:
"On the one hand, I would like to talk about a short story called A lesson not learn which comes from True Tales of American Life, compiled by Paul Auster. The short story deals with an absent-minded girl who her father slaps her because she lost a hat. On the other hand, I will present an extract from Confessions of a Teenage Drama Queen called New York vs. Dellwood: it was published in 2002. The story is about a boy who compares his ex-city and his new suburb in which he moved."
Pouvez-vous me corriger ceci:
"On the one hand, I would like to talk about a short story called A lesson not learn which comes from True Tales of American Life, compiled by Paul Auster. The short story deals with an absent-minded girl who her father slaps her because she lost a hat. On the other hand, I will present an extract from Confessions of a Teenage Drama Queen called New York vs. Dellwood: it was published in 2002. The story is about a boy who compares his ex-city and his new suburb in which he moved."
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1. Réponse SelmaJodelle
j'aime bien ! je pense qu'il n' y a pas de fautes syntaxiques..
Mais ce que je ne comprend pas , pourquoi l'utilisation de l'expression 《 on the one hand , on the other hand 》!? parce que je crois que c'est une expression qui sert parfaitement a faire des oppositions ! sinon tu veux numéroter les "story" que tu présentes , tu pourrais simplement utiliser " First & second " ...